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Feedback from the first of our Beta Readers for LEON’S LAIR

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This is from the first of our beta readers to finish. Brought tears to this tired writer’s eyes. I just had to share it.

5 STARS
If you are looking for an adventure in the palm of your hand this book is a MUST read. The Authors take you to a paradise beyond belief, where just under the surface there lies centuries of struggle between good and evil. This book truly has it all, Mystery, Paranormal, Romance, and just enough insanity to make your mind spin!

I think you did very well in drawing us in to all the characters, really getting us to know them and who they were, now, before and showing us how they developed as a result of the circumstances and situations of the story. I, of course, Loved Peter, Jane, Remy, and Wolf. I love a strong female that can think through a situation as Jane did.

How Remy could take control, and make others feel and influence them that they could do the same even if she herself was afraid. I loved how resourceful and determined Peter is and a constant can do optimist regardless of his fear or what he faced, going so far outside his comfort zone, not only for himself, but for people he hardly knew.

Wolf was a great man of mystery, who took chances and broke rules because of his intuition that it would work out, willing to risk his future, just to get to know if there was a different path he should be following.

I felt for Leon that he was a big bundle of crazy due to what he was handed from the time he was a child, and that he wanted nothing more than someone to share his world and grow with. The Beautiful Beast, seeking his Queen to save him.

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